lunes, 9 de noviembre de 2015
A normal day
Every day I wake up at 6:50 am. I take a bath until 7 am approximately , I get ready with my uniform and then I eat breakfast. My mom do my breakfast every morning. I go to school from 7:45-2:35. When I get home at 3 pm I eat and at 4:30 to 6 pm I train soccer in CAT. I drive from CAT to my house and I arrive home about 6:10 pm. From 6:10- 10 I do homework, take a bath and watch some Netflix. 10:30 I have dinner, then I use my phone some time and go to bed.
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Well, is a bit of a run on, but other than that very straight forward. Maybe talk about why you play soccer or what Netflix show you watch.
ResponderBorrarOk, so I like that you tell me about your schedule, but I feel like you should maybe detail it a bit more as it can get too sudden and end too fast. Also, try to work out some gramatical errors you've got going on there.
ResponderBorrarLiked your blog, just try to improve.
Ricky- I hope that you take the boys' advice to heart because it is really good. It would definitely be interesting to hear about why you enjoy playing soccer. I understand your schedule, but why should I care about it. Does it show me how busy you are? What do you have that keeps you happy while you are so busy? These are the types of questions that you can answer within your post. Once you address these issues you will have a much stronger post. Thanks for sharing though! :)
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